Brainstorm common and cliched endings to movies, books, stories, etc.
Discuss common, overused endings to five-paragraph essays
Discuss cliched endings to autobiographies
Notes on strong conclusions
Handout: Read example of a strong ending to a memoir about place, Helen Blatt's "Returning Home."
Answer the following questions in 1-2 sentences each:
1. What did Blatt learn from her trip? Summarize this in a sentence or two on the bottom of the page.
2. How did she manage to convey this information without
sounding cliché or overly sentimental? Explain this
in another 1-2 sentences.
Homework: Your "almost-final" draft of your environmental autobiography is due on Friday! Add a new conclusion based on today's information. Use my feedback on your draft to improve the organization, and make sure to avoid overused words!
Your final draft will be due on Tuesday.
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